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Blackasnight ( last pic with elements 8) by Onyx-Niight Blackasnight ( last pic with elements 8) by Onyx-Niight
might as well go out with a bang right? anyway thx to my epic friend ( who i shall not name so she wont be spammed)
gave me elements 10
so ya =3
anyway this is my oc Blackasnight or blacknight (hes standing in sunlight)
he is the god of light and darkeness and is a main charatcer in a seris :iocnfanticyismine: will publish. she has alsready published a book called shapeshifters mark and it was amasing.. if ur interested ill show u her interview vid.
(blacknights my baby tochy.. but feel free to make pics of him =3)
Well, for starters - if all the yellow thing is light, you should more think about where it comes from, aka source, and then put it only on relevant places.
The angle of the lower jaw seems to be out of perspective.
Depending on the perspective, the head spikes seems to be behind the head.
But At first place, I'd recommend you to take a normal pencil and paper and train the boring way sketch tons pictures every day. It'll make your line less scattered. Also, without using a rubber, it'll teach you to think about what you want to draw. To train shades and lights, simply draw normal objects you have on your table, using your lamp to put the source of light.
Anyway! Keep the drawing up, because if you will, you'll get better with every picture. Don't give up :)
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stephanpartipilo Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013   Photographer
This is really good
Onyx-Niight Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks -3 but its actually really old
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