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DNTS: Wanting

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  Bluestflower stomped away from her human owners glad to be away from them.  
    “I’d a thought they clearly would have noticed I didn’t want to be bothered,” she said to herself. 
    For once she did not enjoy the brushing of her coat by humans, and walked through the piles of snow that quickly stuck to her blue-grey coat.  
    “Such shame you just brushed me,” she giggled mischievously to herself. 
    She thought about the other horse that was currently at the DNTS stable, wondering how she would react when she saw a new horse in her home. 
    “Why couldn't I have come first?  Then this could have been my stable and she would had to obey my law.  I shouldn’t have to abide by her; I should be in charge.” 
    Bluestflower longed to be in charge. She was always on the bottom of the herd in her old stable, and mistreated by the other horses. 
    “Maybe we can cut a deal, I could always be second,” thought Bluestflower.
    Hesitating she then though, ”No, I will prove I am strongest.  I will be the leader, I will not take second place…and I have magic on my side.”  
    She then trotted over to the stable, hoping her powers would awaken soon.


Bluestflower
some insight on her eh?
 Also im practicing my semi-realism ^ ^
from the group 

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I really do like this image. The texture is rather unique and gives the impression of soft, short hair. The way you colored her fur is also very nice. Since she is a blue roan horse, she's basically a black horse with white hairs mixed in, so the way you colored and shaded the figure didn't damage the effect. The colored lines also look very nice too.

However, the conformation of the head is a little off. Just so you know, the three objects on top of the head are actually feathers, and for semi realism would require a little more detail to flow with the rest of the image. For these horses, the shape of the head should resemble the real-life Andalusian Horse. The face should be fairly straight and never dished. The muzzle is also rounded, which I don't advise. The cheek, although this character is a mare, should be a little more defined and square. The shape of the ear also looks a little strange, but it does help convey her angry expression.

The mane also looks rather unnatural. What this reminds me of is those little horse dolls with hair made of yarn; it's cute, but not realistic. The hair in this image is kinda clumpy, mostly due to the shape of the tips. Cartoon hair is mostly made up of tangle-like shapes. These shapes should be wide at the base but thin at the top.

Other than that, I'd say you did an excellent job <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>